Dream Deep

You could make a novel out of it! :wink: I mean, I know you have "Eos Quo" that connects to this and ... lol, whatever the other one was, but ...

This sounds like something MetalHead would have started... ^_^

Agreed... *new title edited*

Great job! Heh, I kept going through saying 'this one's my favorite stanza... no, this one'. Not too profound and lyrical, but nice nontheless. Good job! :wink:

Well, I hope it comes along well for ya... as soon as it gets sorted out. ^_^ It was a great read, you're not allowed to give it up. :wink: ...

Make you fall. - Shan Tefur ... Strip you of rank...? - Arrehei Livny *as Shan gives Livny a murderous look* -- Do you enjoy your occupation?

Hi Myth, thanks for the crit. ^_^ I really appreciate it. The Strazhas are people right? Then you would need to replace ‘which’ with ‘who’. Right you are... sorry about ...

Ahh... I've got to crit the rest of this. I'm behind. ^_^ I'll try to have Chapter 4 commented upon soon for ya... :wink:

(spacing, mon frere...?) ^_^

Dear Dream Deep: What. The. Bloody. Hell. Are. You. Thinking. God, if I wasn't bleeding all over the place I'd get up right now and break your legs. Shan -- ...

(Snoink-> You pig! XD. ^_^) Ah... sure... - Shan Tefur Rub it in, why don't you. For the love of God, it's the military, you don't get fresh fish at ...

The Brothers Karamazon by Fyodor Dostoyevsky. Totally awesome... ^_^ Ooh! Or Ward No. 6 by Anton Chekhov... one of the most brilliant short stories I've read in a long time. ...

*thinks* Oh, no wait. I remember. Lol, yes I've seen it. Twas unaware that the author's name was Morgenstern, though... :wink:

? ... Lol, I dunno. Morgenstern means Morningstar in German and Oskar Morgenstern developed game theory, and I believe Bjorn's making a Tolkein reference (correct me if I'm wrong)... S. ...

Neato. ^_^